Seventeen syllables often linking two thoughts seemingly unrelated - an underlying pattern sensed, but never stated - The sparrow hunts worms In the garden - Monsoon rains Flood the rice paddies - Not one thought following, logically, from another - Slamming door echoes Behind you - My heart cracks like The porcelain bowl - but, Monsoon rains flood the Rice paddies - My heart cracks like The porcelain bowl. The traditional rhythm is five seven five - Usually, a season is implied, to set the mood. Slamming door echoes Behind you - In the garden Sparrows hunt for worms. But form serves image above all - A picture, a feeling captured - Slamming door shatters The porcelain bowl - my heart Outside, sparrows sing.
Published in Between the Leaves, by Barnes & Noble Press.